What examiners expect
- Cover every required point with a clear stance
- Maintain formal tone and clarity throughout
- Structure paragraphs logically with effective links
- Use accurate grammar and precise vocabulary
| Criterion | Focus |
|---|---|
| Content | Answer all parts; relevant arguments |
| Comm. Achievement | Register; clarity; cohesion |
| Organisation | Structure; transitions |
| Language | Grammar; vocabulary; complexity |
⏱️ Exam tip: Devote 5 minutes at the start for planning and 5 minutes at the end for checking.
A conclusion that ends abruptly after a single sentence or without synthesizing the essay's main points, leaving readers without closure or final insight.
Copying the introduction word‑for‑word in the conclusion instead of rephrasing and analyzing what the essay has established.
| ✗ Informal | ✓ Formal |
|---|---|
| look at | examine |
| think about | consider |
| get / give | obtain / provide |
| set up | establish |
| a lot | many / numerous |
| ✗ Weak | ✓ Strong |
|---|---|
| very important | crucial |
| very good | excellent / ideal |
| very bad | poor / disastrous |
| very weak argument | unconvincing |
| very strong argument | robust |
Contractions: can't → cannot, it's → it is, they're → they are, you're → you are
Colloquial: cool, basically, literally, just, really
Stance adjuncts: obviously, naturally, of course, undoubtedly
Clichés: at the end of the day, think outside the box
Shortened: info, asap, telly
I cannot remember my password, I created it long ago.
Fix: Use a semicolon or full stop.I cannot remember my password; I created it long ago.
Why: Two clauses joined correctly.The authors provided a protocol and offer an alternative.
Fix: Keep tense consistent.The authors provide a protocol and offer an alternative.
Why: Present for general statements.The code was broken by Alan Turing.
Fix: Prefer active voice.Alan Turing broke the code.
Why: S–V–O is direct.By working late, the essay was finished.
Fix: Make doer explicit.By working late, I finished the essay.
Why: Modifier attaches to "I".| Tense | Use | Example |
|---|---|---|
| Present | Factual; refs | "argues…" |
| Past | Events; studies | "showed…" |
| Future | Will occur | "will need…" |
| accept | except |
| affect | effect |
| its | it's |
| less | fewer |
| their | there/they're |
| your | you're |
💡 Writing tips: Favor S–V–O order • Split long sentences • Keep paragraphs focused